Acpuire writing class!!!

To earncredit this writing class.
First, you should write like diary. If you have no theme, you read a news paper or watch news.
So, you can write blog everyday.

Second, you should practice typing speed tyial. Every class, we have to type a word while 5 minutes. Then we can't use dictionaly so we must know various word. If you have few vocabulary, you may not write sentence. So, you should study vocabulary.

Third, we have to write essay every month. It's so long essay. So, you should write !!! Otherwise you may drop this class. To write essay is so good for you. But,　At　first I can't write long essay. Because I'm poor grammer and vocabulary. But write many essay, you can write long essay at the last. I'm　regret that I don't write blog everyday. So you don't give up!!!
I wish your success!!!

[148 words]

A~BAN

Jun.29
My friend Hiroko cut her hair and permanent.
One weeks ago I went to the beauty parlor for a permanent too.
And her false eyelashes is so long!!! She sai mistake number.....
She is Janet! We respect her.

[38 words]

Mole

Jun.29
I introduce my friend. Her name is Tomomi. I called Mogurasann!!!
One day she wear brown cardigan, look like mole. She called me Kitsunesann!!!
We are very good friend.

[29 words]

Rabbit

Jun.29
I talked with my friend Shoko.
When she was a junior high school student, she was a turn of rabbit hutch.
One day the little rabbit born, she hold a baby but she was frighten. Suddenly she drop the rabbit then dead........
Now she is so regret.

[47 words]

Rainy

Jun.29
Today is rainy. I feel bad. So I have to do many thing.

[13 words]

TEST

Jun.29
I took a introduction of Christ. It was so difficult for me.
Last night I write a report until 4 am. I have to 2000 letter. This mornig I have to wake up at 7 o'clock but I slept late.......I woke up at 8 o'clock. So I'm sleepy now.

[49 words]

New Zealand

My friend Anri, she goes to New Zealand to study abroad for half a year.
We met through decoration team. She is so cute and kind!!!
I want to go New Zealad some day☆

[35 words]

Cake

Jun.28
I worked part time job. The tea break time I got a cheesecake. It was homemade cake so very delicious!!! Thank you very much.

[24 words]

New Car☆

Jun.26
Today I went to car shop with my family. My senior working there.
I have a car that name is kei. It's so cute!!! But recently bad condition so we dicide to change car.
I choose otti! The color is Red it's so cute.

[44 words]

Takunomi

Jun.25
After nomikai, I went my friend's house.
His name is Nao. We aren't know each other. But we become good friend.
I drunk too much so I had no memory.....

[30 words]

Fireman

I went to sakura with my friend and her friends. They are fireman!!!
They are so funny! And the one is my friend's pal.
We talk a lot and drink alcohol too much. I had good time.

[37 words]

Gozyouan

Jun.25
I went to Gozyouan with culture select member. But they a person of leisure.
We drunk alcohol a lot. The day Kanae's Birthday, so The master give a special menu!!!
Various club member gathered there, so it was so exciting.

[40 words]

Pisori~no

Jun.24

I and Minako study until the night at school library. We become hungry.
Finish homework, we went to pisori~no by my car.
We ate too much.

[26 words]

flower arrangement

Jun.20
I paericipated new year's party of flower arrngement club in merupatuku. Ikka teacher invite for my club member this party.
I arranged some flower. To arranger flower is so difficult for me.
I got a many bouquet.

[37 words]

Happy Birthday

Jun.18
Today is my best friends birthday!
Happy Birth Day MAYU♪
We have been known since 8 years ago. We often go shopping so we like shopping and eating!
We have same hobby. That is ...piano! Now, she is learning piano at university.
Have a nice day!

[46 words]

Nabe party

Jun.16
We held a Nabe party. We cooked kimuchi nabe!!! It was very good.
We assembled at my junior's house. So many people gathered. The various club member came there. We enjoyed it!!!

[32 words]

Kyana

She is my best friend. We have been good friend since junior high school student.
We often go shopping then. But now she goes another school, we can't meet practically.
She is good at rider as motor bicycle.

[38 words]

3-2

We were same class when junior high school that is to say so good member!
We often gather. We went to drive, sea, festival and so on.

[27 words]

Funny

We are close friends!!! One boy live in Fukuoka. But he often come back to Kumamto.
They are so funny. We go izakaya once in a while.

[27 words]

The student council

This is the student council member when I was elementary school.
We are good friends. We talked many things about elementary schooldays.

[22 words]

Childhood friends

She is my childhood friend. We have known each other since we were small children.
She is so funny and kind. I often go dinner with her.

[27 words]

Teacher

This is my teacher!!! Left side teacher who teached music for me.
He plays the cello too. He is so funny.

[21 words]

Alumni association

Jan.14
I went to two alumni association at night.
One is elementary school days. Almost people gather at izakaya.
I saw my friends in elementary school days after a long separation!!!
We were soaked in good old memory. I was very enjoyed it!

After that, I went to another alumni association. That is junior high school class.
We are so good class mates. We often gather!!!
I want to alumni association again☆

[72 words]

Coming of age day

Jan.14
I participated at coming of age ceremony. I looked forward to come the day!!!
This morning I go hair salon at 5 am. It's so early but I can't sleep because so pleasure.
I took many picture. I met many friends. They aren't change. At ceremony I met a teacher who was my homeroom teacher when I was junior high school student 3 rd grade.

[65 words]

shopping

I and my mother went to taff mama! There is a hair beaurty salon.
The reason why we take kimono.
After, we went to shopping. I bought a one piece dress and necklace.
It's so gorgeous.

[19 words]

housecleaning

Jan.6
I did the general cleanig my part time job place. We start at 9 o'clock to 4 o'clock. After that, there become so beautiful.

After Finishing cleaning we went toChinese restaurant. We ate too much!!!
[35 words]

typing speed trial

Typing speed trial is trial is so difficult for me.

While 5 minute, I have to type more than 150 words. But I can’t expression about my feel and thought things. And, I can’t remember words. To write sentence, we have to know many words.　We must study words, grammar and expression. This semester I can’t write a more than 150 words. This year I want to become fast typer. When I write sentence, I can’t translate Japanese to English quickly. So, I write English too late. But , It is important for me to typing speed trial. To do it, I become fast to type English.

[107words]

2008

Jan.3
My family pay a visit to a shrine on New Year's Day.
My brother is candidate next month so I give a charm.
I wish He pass the examination.
[29 words]

SHOPPING

Jan.2nd
My cousin came to my house.
We held a new year party in my house.
I ate too much.
In the afternoon I went to the city to shopping.
I and Minako bought many clothes.
And we went to Starbucks coffee, we ate cake!
It was so delicious.
[48 words]

Present

Jan 1st
My mother give me a pierced earring.
It was so cute! I like it.
Thank you mother☆
[17 words]

A HAPPY NEW YEAR 2008

Dec.31 to Jan.1st
The day is the last day 2007. I and my friend went to The WATAMI.
We comig to new year at there. We counted 5! 4! 3! 2! 1!
At the moment we said "A Happy New Year" we toasted.
We pay a visit to a Fujisaki shrine on New Year's Day.
I draw a fortune slip! It was very good luck! I become very happy.
Next we go to kengun shrine. We met some people at the shrine.
It was so nice and special on New Year's Eve and New Year's!
[92 words]

homecoming

Dec. 29
My friend is home for the holidays and to participate come of age ceremony.
But He lost his wallet on the way to station.
We went to policeoffice. He was very depressed.
I hope for be found his wallet.
After that we went to friend house. We drunk alcohol.
[49 words]

Nabepa☆

Dec.27
I participated nabe party!!!
My senior invite me. I went to friends house by car.
We talk a lot.
[19 words]

Merry Christmas

Today I spend good time with my frind.
First we went to Kumamoto airport for no reason.
We send off air plane after we went to saishunkan to see illumination.
It was marvelous!!!!!!
We can see out of car. After that we went ro dinner at Capricciosa!
We ordered many food and ate until one's stomach distends.
[57 words]

Ittkennya!!!

Dec.24
Xmas eve! But I have to go part time job.
I worked until 11 o'clock. After work I went to Ikkenya with my senior.
She and me tlked 3 hours. Then date is Dec 25!!! Master give Xmas cake for us.
It's was so lovely.
Many people come there. They held lonely party.
[53 words]

Front desk clerk

Dec.23
I did infromation desk of concert.
The day light music club held a concert so my club have to do information desk.
Many people came so very busy!!!
[28 words]

New friend

Dec.17
At lunch time I and Minako and Taiki went to cafeteria to meet Lambert.
Lambert is teacher at Gakuenndai attached shool.
He is so funny and good at Japanese. He wants to form movie club at KGU.
He study Japanese hard!!! I thought I want to speak English well.
[49 words]

Xmas flower

Dec.13
I arranged Xmas flower!!!
This is so cute! I bring this and arranged at my house.
I pleasure Xmas.
[19 words]

Cleaning

Dec.13
We have to clean of my clubroom.
I go my clubroom.........It was very dirty!!!!!!!!!
I and my friend began to clern...but We give up...
[24 words]

New officer

Nov.11
I participated old and new of cluture club leader party.
All old and new club leader assembled.
I talked a senior. I talked once, he remember me!!!
[27 words]

Party

Nov.10
My club held a term of office party in Melpalk hall.
I become a leader of my club.
My club only girls. To pull together is hard but I do one's best!!!
[32 words]

KUSAKENN carnival Final

Dec.1
Today held a Kusakenn carnival final!!!!!!!!
This is drink party. All cluture club member assembl this party.
It was very exciting! After that I went to post-party party!!!
I ate mostu nabe. I talk with my friend all the time.
[40 words]

TOEIC

Dec.1
I took a TOEIC test.
It was so difficult for me. But I took that to improve my skill and confirm of my lebel.
[24 words]

dodgeball

Nov.25
Today culture club held a dodgeball match!!!
At first my club member only 2.....
I call for another club member. It was so exciting!!!
[24 words]

New leader assembly!!!!!

Nov.24
The new leader assembly in The WATAMI.
but.....only 8 people.but we enjoyed that.
After that I went to another izakaya with my friend.
[23 words]

motsunabe

Nov.21
Flower arrangement club and news paper club held a drink party.
We went to "YOKOBACHI". Motsu nabe is popular in this restaurant.
It was so delicious!!! We drunk too much. It was very good time.
[35 words]

Lunch

Nov. 19
I went to J-cafe with my friend.
She is older than I so she is senior.
When I decoration memeber, she was a sub leader of my club.
Now, she is woking but the day was vacation.
I and she talked various things.
[43 words]

First rate prize

Nov.4
My flower arrangement club get firstr rate prize of display section.
I was very surprize and glad!!!
I and my member cry.
[22 words]

Writing IVc: Portfolio

ID:6245

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, and Words

(See: Note 2, below.)

Months	08	09	10	11	12	01	Totals	fn	Indices
Book reviews	0	0	2	1	7	2	12
Blog posts	1	3	16	6	1	49	76
Words	58	117	1342	1043	1172	1953	5685
TOTAL	---	---	---	---	---	---	---	---

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below)

1.1. Showcase	Short titles [+ links]	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	¶	W	C	L	P	M	Notes
Mega- essay 07.10.12	Kumamoto sightseeing	07.10.10	7	461	0	2	0	0
Favorite place(-s) 07.10.26	Favorite Place	07.10.24	5	379	0	0	0	0
Movie review 07.11.11	toystory	07.11.23	4	366	3	0	0	0
Community life 07.11.25	Community	07.10.23	3	379	0	0	0	0
TV in Japan 07.12.09
Learning w/ computers 07.12.21	6th Essay: Learning with computer	07.12.21	13	754	0	0	0	0
Totals	---	---	32	2339	3	2	0	0	---

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; identify your best essay, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]
  

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd)	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*	Wow! Get a Load of These Demographics.	07.12.12	25
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*	toystory	07.11.14	24
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd)	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments*
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*	toystory	07.11.11	62	good comments.
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*	Friends	07.11.28	23
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?

• ...
  

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

• [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; write out your reflections on giving and receiving comments here.]
  

3.0. Typing Speed Trials

Showcase	Numbers of words	Dates (yy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial*	51	07.12.05
3.2. Best typing speed trial*	116	07.10.24
3.3. Improvement (best minus worst)	10minute	---
3.4. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials**	51 96 107 average 85	07.12.05 07.12.19 08.01.18

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* Current semester typing speed trials (five minutes)
** Please list all three dates.

4.0. Book Reviews

4.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	07.05.16	39	1
2-01	The Umbrella	07.10.14	81	0
2-02	Alissa	07.10.14	72	0
2-03	MYSTERY Girl	07.12.04	50	0
2-04	The lost ship	07.12.04	35	0
2-05	TITANIC	07.12.04	40	0
2-06	Diana	07.12.04	24	0
2-07	The Magic Barber	07.12.04	48	0
2-08	Girl meets boy	07.12.04	31	0
2-09	Prince William	07.12.04	37	0
2-10	RUN FOR YOUR LIFE	08.01.07	65	0
2-11	FLYING HOME	08.01.08	97	0
2-12
2-13
2-14
2-15
2-16
2-17
2-18
---	---	TOTALS:

Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

4.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]

5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive?	0
5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	0
5.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?	0
5.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?	0
5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	0
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	0
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	0
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)	0
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)	0
"movies" (plural) AND "photos" (plural)	0
5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	0
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? ___ other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. books(26) clubs(25) essays(11) families(1) foods(8) friends(3) hobbies(10) kgks(2) kumamoto(4) Leicester(2) links(6) medias(1) memories(3) movies(1) photos(1) portforios(4) quickposts(71) reviews(22)	---	---
5.3. Links & media	---	---
5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics?		0
Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?		0
How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics? ___ posts including pictures or other graphics	---	---
5.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?	0
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?* ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
5.3.3. Does your blog include other media?		0
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? ___ posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here: ... ... ...	---	---

5.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.

1. ...
2. ...
3. ...

6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

• ...

7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

• ...

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Notes:

1. This portfolio template amplifies the template for Writing IIIc portfolios.
2. The overview section (0.0. Overview, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-01.
3. This essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02.

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disguise

Nov 6
The day is city parade. We disguise. The costume is all handmade and compete with prize.
Also my club make it. This year's theme is "southern country".
Since summer vacation I go school everyday. First we learned design next buy cloth.
I'm first time to make clothes so very difficult.
[50 words]

Book Review 2-11: FLYING HOME

A bird from brazil whom name is Felix. He lives wih the Baxter family in New York.
His home is a big cage. He isn't happy and want to be with his family again.
One day he flies out of his cage and out of the window.
he back to home himself. He meet some birds on the way to home.
He meets a bird. His name is Aca. They go home together. They thought there isn't home.
Then they looked same feather. They looked up. There, above the birds. It's Felix family.
He reach is home.
[97 words]

Book Review 2-10：RUN FOR YOUR LIFE

Kim and Dave were soventeen.They had the same Spanish teacher at school in Liverpool.
One day they went to street. There is no famous buildings, shopping streets.
People said , 'dangerous' but Dave wasn't frightened.
Suddenly A man appeared, he put something that rubbish bin Kim and Dave took it out and opened out...
It was Drugs! They met policeman and they arrested a man.
[65 words]